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every woman want a man
who can improv;
every one love a man
who can think on the fly -
a chap who'll bounce back
from any thorough thrashing
with a wink
and a grin
so dashing,
so sly.
so, let's recap:
every woman want a man
who can bullshit;
every one love a man
who thinks with his fly (undone) -
a real diamond jack
not averse to a good tongue-lashing;
on the brink
let him in;
grin flashing
so, lie.
the heartful king is done in
by wealth and sex appeal,
and what remains of his dignity.
for what value has the unimaginitive romantic
in the realm of the one-eyed jack?
devotion is so
old hat.
who can improv;
every one love a man
who can think on the fly -
a chap who'll bounce back
from any thorough thrashing
with a wink
and a grin
so dashing,
so sly.
so, let's recap:
every woman want a man
who can bullshit;
every one love a man
who thinks with his fly (undone) -
a real diamond jack
not averse to a good tongue-lashing;
on the brink
let him in;
grin flashing
so, lie.
the heartful king is done in
by wealth and sex appeal,
and what remains of his dignity.
for what value has the unimaginitive romantic
in the realm of the one-eyed jack?
devotion is so
old hat.
Literature
Past Our Dancing Days
A kitchen. MAN and WOMAN stand centre stage, in front of a counter with drawers. They are arguing as lights fade on.
WOMAN. Look. Its called a double suicide pact for a reason. I kill myself, and then you kill yourself.
MAN. Why are we doing this again? Do I have to kill myself?
WOMAN. Yes.
MAN. I dont like the smell of blood.
WOMAN. So what?
MAN. I dont like iron either. Probably because iron smells like blood.
WOMAN. Shut up.
MAN. Dont tell me to shut up.
WOMAN. When you shut up, Ill stop telling yo
Literature
My Muse Went On Vacation
My muse went on vacation
and took all my best thoughts
and all my favorite phrases,
and the bunnies with their plots,
she ran off with all the fluff stuff,
she ran off with the hero's sword--
she left me sitting here alone,
bemused and rather bored.
My muse went on vacation
To a sunny foreign clime,
and left me sitting here alone
without a word to rhyme,
She's laying on a beach somewhere
without a hint of snow,
and leaving me with winter's chill
and no place left to go.
My muse went on vacation -
I hope she's coming back
With a healthy tan, a rosy glow
and some fresh stuff to attack--
I miss her interaction,
how she drov
Literature
The Couplet and the Villanelle
The Couplet and the Villanelle
Said the couplet to the villanelle
"You, for all of your complexity
really are a vacuum and a shell
overwrought and odd, compared to me.
You, for all your cunning and your craft
your metaphors and similes and signs
conjure awkward rhymes that make me laugh
strung together in repeating lines."
Said the villanelle to couplet small
"I know I can ramble on at times
but, you know, you are inside of me
and you are complicit in my rhymes.
What's ironic though, you know... doggonnit.
both of us are stuck within this sonnet."
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ironically, the diamond jack has two eyes. it was a 50/50 shot.
thanks for reading.
*edit: it needed closure. last line is new. my thanks for reading (and commenting) remain.
thanks for reading.
*edit: it needed closure. last line is new. my thanks for reading (and commenting) remain.
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No no, I like the whole, not just the beginning.
This is the first of your works I've read and I'm an absolute lingual dunce but I like it. And I think I agree with it. I dont want to, but I do.
This is the first of your works I've read and I'm an absolute lingual dunce but I like it. And I think I agree with it. I dont want to, but I do.