i am the wordless; the inarticulate.
the low, guttural moan
of a dispirited, longing heart.
tired of these silent deliberations
these tacit accusations
tired of being alone.
i am the night breeze in early spring
howling softly through your eaves,
sighing dimly on peach-fine hairs
that i make stand on the nape of your neck.
i am unhere, and you like it that way.
i am but a whisper,
a faint trace of a word
left hanging on a childs ear,
brushed subtly by ghost lips.
i am what happens every so oft in a mans life;
i am the nights he decides to take up his pen
and let the slow, deliberate words borne in his mind
be spoken onto paper
and nowhere else.
i am the wordless; the inarticulate.
hear me roar
my silent, mournful roar.














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i am unhere.
and you like it that way.
I would just join those two to make a stanza. The pause is still noticeable, it's still dramatic, but you don't drop the flow. *shrugs* Just my opinion. A good read
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Interestingly enough, I found your poetry very, I don't know, manly(?). Yeah, I think that's the word. Sometimes when I read poetry and then find out the poet is a guy, I find it very surreal to believe. I hope none of this sounds too sexist. Perhaps it's the word 'guttural'. Not too many women would use that word.
I enjoyed this poem. Will check out the rest of your gallery soon.
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Thanks, kid. I'll be sure to check out yours as well, once I've had some sleep, and mayhap a little redemption, too.
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i am the wordless; the inarticulate.
the low, guttural moan
of a dispirited, longing heart.
tired of these silent deliberations
these tacit accusations
tired of being alone.
i am the night breeze in the early spring
howling softly through your eaves
sighing dimly on the peach-fine hairs
that i make stand, on the nape of your neck.
i am but a whisper,
a faint trace of a word
left hanging on a child’s ear,
brushed subtly by ghost lips.
i am what happens every so oft in a man’s life;
i am the nights he decides to take up his pen
and let the slow, deliberate words
spoken in his mind
be borne onto paper.
(or are they borne in his mind,
and spoken onto paper?)
i am unhere, and you like it that way.
i am the wordless; the inarticulate.
hear me roar
my silent, mournful roar.
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Well I'd love to stay and chat, but you're a total bitch.
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